bawang putihmerah

Bawang putih and Bawang merah 

version by students 9f of JHS 2 PEMALANG

Once upon a time there lived a small family consisting only of a young widower with a young daughter named bawang putih. Where they lived happily together, but on the other hand feels lonely without her friend if her father  trade out of town.
One day there came a young widow and a daughter named bawang merahs, they are the people who will begin seizing property bawang putih happy life.  (let's see)

SCENE 1 :

Putih’s father    :       “how can i do for you?”

Merah’s mother :       “excuse me , sir. Do you need a maid to take care in your great home? I’m a widow, sir, and I do not have a place to stay“

Putih’s father    :        ” actually I’m don’t need a maid . i just need nanny!”

(bawang merah bawang putih accompany playing dolls)

Putih                :       “daddy, that woman so pity. And her daughter    is nice child, and can be myfriend?!”

Putih’s father    :       “but ...?”

Putih                :       “please, daddy!”

Merah’s mom     :       “ you’re a nice girl but you’re father refuse us”

Putih’s father    :        “ of course not, i’m sorry about that. Welcome to my house!”

Putih                :        “yes, merah we can playing doll every time together!”

Merah              :        “not like easy what do you think. You’re my majesty”

Putih                :       “forget that. Now we are sisters!”

Putih’s father    :       “make yourself comfort in our house!”

Merah’s mom     :        “thank you very much,sir. We are so glad to take care putih and your house!”

Putih                :       “came on, aunty... let’s see your room!”

SCENE 2                  (in bedroom)

Merah              :       “ putih and her father so glad to receive us. If her father is my father. Maybe i’m will be so happy!”

Merah’s mom     :       “do you want it?”

Merah              :       “what do you mean?”

Merah’s mom     :       “ I can make them change. Putih be your maid and her father will be your father!”

Merah              :       “how can you do it?”

Merah’s mom     :       “ you just attend my rule , okay!”

SCENE 3

Tommorow merah’s mom prepare all every thing to breakfast and needed of putih and her father! The putih’s father begin interesting of merah’s mom. And he will be marry that woman in her feeling.

Putih’s father   :       “ putih, came here. I will talk you something with you!”

Putih               :       “what’s up? Daddy!”

Putih’s father   :       “do you agree if i’m marry again?”

Putih               :       “who will be your wife?” don’t you think again! Putih not agree about your plan because putih afraid if your wife just like your money.”

Putih’s father   :       “but merah’s mother she look so good for you. Look at this morning, she prepared all your needs. And she's so motherly. While her daughter , she could be your sister . And i’m must to go into town to trade tomorrow "

Putih                :       “ are you sure?”

Putih’s father   :       “yes, i’m so sure about my plan!”

Putih                :       “okay , if that is your decision and the best your decision, i just keep your rule!”

SCENE 4

The next day with father and mother married to simple red. Now is the time to re-trade the withe fathers in the city. The atmosphere in the house was to touched.

Merah’s mom     :       “are you sure to back sell to city my husband?

Putih’s father    :       “yes, my wife. Take care putih and merah. I troash you?”

Putih                :       “daddy, please you’re stay in here”

Merah              :       “putih, i’m here. I will acocompany you every time what you want. Do you want consent lo leave your father?”.

Putih                :       “daddy,putih not agree if you’re gone?”.

Putih’s father    :       “listen merah’s said. I’m fine and you have mom and sister now”.

Merah’s mom     :       “leave her now. Before she more sad. I know the goodnest for our children”.

Putih’s father    :       “fine, putih i go to city”.

Merah              :       “take care. We will miss you so much”.

Putih                :       “daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaadyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy”.

SINCE 5

So quickly train the horse’s father, his father’s departure was the view is over the white view. This is the beginning of life with a putih’s mother and sister of her.

Merah              :       “basic crybaby!”.

Merah’s mom     :       “huuh, merah aren’t is your sister. Don’t hurt her”.

Putih                :       “thanks mom”.

Merah’s mom     :       “what? You call me mommy? No way!”

Putih                :       “mom? Merah?”

Merah              :       “call me princess and my mom majesty. You understand

Putih                :       “but.............”

Merah              :       “aren’t you brave of my said?”

Merah’s mom     :       “obey us or....

Putih                :       “yes my majesty

Ibu                  :       “alright, to first your task prepare all food for us and wash all dirty clothes. And us we love take nap and after that we get up. All everything finished. Are you understand?”

Putih                :       “but how can i do it?”

Merah              :       “are you protest?”

Putih                :       “sorry”

Merah              :       “quickly”

Putih                :       “aren’t you are help me? T o all everything ending?”

Merah’s mom     :       “are you ask me?”

Putih                :       “not, my majesty”

SCENE 6             (river)

Putih                :       “How can i do wash much clothes? And i must cleaning house this is my bad dream. Huuuh”

Ikan mas          :       “hay, beautiful girl”

Putih                :       “who is that?”

Ikan mas          :       “look at the river”

Putih                :       “golden fish? Can talk?”

Ikan mas          :       (cliiiing)

Putih                :       “and you can change to human? How can?”.

Ikan mas          :       “that is probability. And i’m here to accompany you. I want to tour friends now”

Putih                :       “but i will wash my dirty clothes, not play for you”

Ikan mas          :       “bimsalabiiim”

Putih                :       “what do you doing for my clothes? My clothes becomeclean and good smell?”

Ikan mas          :       “now you can play with me”

Putih                :       “yes, you now my friend”

Ikan mas          :       “of course”

Putih                :       “why you can change to human?”

Ikan                 :       “actually, i’m a the lord. And i’m know you are come in here first?”

Putih                :       “yes, my life change cause my mom and my sister today”

Ikan mas          :       “i know it”

Putih                :       “where do you know?”

Ikan                :       “with your eyes”

Putih                :       “haha, you are a naught boy. I will go to home, tomorrow i will come back early to see you again”.

Ikan mas          :       “okay, i will waiting you”

Putih                :       "good bye" 

SCENE 7        (away to go home)

Putih               :         “aw, who is throw the rubbish”

Pangeran         :         “i’m sorry. That’s is my work”

Putih               :         “oh, no! My clothes are dirty. You are bad boy”

Pangeran         :         “hey, miss. Whats your name?”

A little conflict make the prince fall in love. The prince look for medicine plant to heal his mom.he become always think about putih.

SINCE 8

Merah             :         “look that mom! We maid had to return home. uuuh, the smell of sweat!”

Merah’s mom      :         “where have you been? Look this is  that the time? And you have not prepared eaten for us ?!” (hand will slap putih) “wait, what this? My clothes, why my clothes dirty!”

Putih               :         “I’m sorry mom, I’ve washed them, but mom clothes dirty. I fell mom”

merah’s mom    :         “no! you want to ruin my clothes?!”

putih              :         “No mom no,I’m sorry mom” (kneeling)

merah             :         (preen with powder)

merah’s mom    :         “i don’t want to know, the clothes must be clean and fragrant tomorrow!”

putih               :         “mom, aren’t you have any clothes more better? Why didn’t mom wearing clothes the other?

merah             :          “shut up! Back to the kitchen and prepared eaten for us!”

SINCE 9

Putih               :          “somehow I missed ikan mas. I had earlier come to the river and bring good food for him,Maybe he was hungry ” (mengemas makanan sisa yang ada di meja makan)

Merah             :          “the food that belongs to me and you take it all?” (keep calm)

Putih               :          “This for my new freind, he who helped wash clothes merah and your mother. Oh well I got to the river?” (mendengakkan muka dan kaget)

Merah             :                 “What? Tell me once again? Freind? Who is your best freind? How dare he help you!”

Putih               :          “oh no merah no, it’s a food for me. Yeah for me ”

Merah’s mom    :          “uhmmm, why are you noisy. It’s still early!”

Merah             :          “Mom, putih pack all the food and will take it to river!”

Merah’s mom    :          “never mind, let it go, it also marks our food?”

Merah             :          “mom, but...........”

Putih               :          “thank you mom, putih went go to the river”

Merah             :          “Mom, Mom Don’t know what happened? She brought food for ikan mas which he says his freind. And his freind help wash clothes. How could I receive?”

Merah’s mom    :          “really?”

Merah             :          “Oh My God ,I can’t be wrong. I’m not deaf mom. How if I’m overtaken him into the river?”

Merah’s mom   :         “oke,mom agrees!”

Scene 10

(on ​​the river)

Putih               :          "I have occupy my promise to you. Playing water until the hot sun. Are you happy?

Goldfish          :          "of course, especially with your food you brought. Yum yum "

Putih               :          "haha, you're it. I'll bring more food for you. It's getting hot, mom waiting later, I came home first yes "
Goldfish :       "we play again tomorrow"
Putih      :       "hem"
Merah            : "oooh, that goldfish are helping to finish the laundry? Putih had lied, just look!”

Merah             :          "gold fish?"

Goldfish          :          "oh, it seems there is a beautiful girl called me. What's Up lady? "

Merah             :          "I brought some food for you. You're certainly hungry? "

Goldfish          :          "waaah, but how did you know my being here?"

Merah              :          "introduce my name soul. I'm a putih friend.   Putih never told about you "

Goldfish           :          "it seems a nice girl who showed death" (while chewing, and goldfish fainting)

Merah              :          "basic idiot! I had food poisoning. I'll take the fish home and putih for my lunch menu. Hahahahaha "

(at home)

Merah             :          "Mommy, where putih?"

Merah’s Mom   :          "no one you ask him? He was hanging clothes possible "

Merah             :          "mom here!" (Whispering)

Merah’s mom    :          "Well. You're so clever! "

Merah’s mom    :          "putiiih, dear. Come here son? "

Putih               :          "Yes what is it mom? Did I do something wrong? "

Merah’s mom    :          "No, she wanted to take you to lunch while discussing a few things"

Putih               :          "but my work, mom?"

Merah             :          "living alone, later masakkan cold mother, it is not pleasant"

Putih               :          (smiles and sits begin eating)

Merah             :          "what about the food? Aslo? "

Putih               :          "very delicious, fish is this lady?"

Merah             :          "goldfish boy, haha" (toss with her mother)

Putih               :          "What? You are evil "(while crying)

Merah             :          "What? We're evil? No honey, you were eating, we did not. How does it feel to eat meat themselves your friend? "

Putih               :          (take out the bones and left her crying)

Merah             :          "hey where you going sweet child? Lunch we have not finished! See tirimu bu child, indecent! "

Merah’s mom   :          "What? My stepson? Not willing! "

Merah             :          "Mommy, what if he reported what we do to the father? History we can die "

Merah’s mom   :          "true you say, he's a spoiled and who tauuuu"

Merah             :          "mother father have come home. You heard the sound of his chariot? Emergency. Putiiihhhh "

Merah’s mom   :          "you quickly overtaken putih. Do not let him complain. Mom would pretend - pretend illness. Ooh but no, she'll do the dishes. Hurry up! "

                     

SCENE 11

Merah             :          “momwhere is putih?”

Merah’s mom   :          “are you kidding. She is slug our clothes”

Merah             :         “mom, come here”

Merah’s mom    :         “alright, you are clever girl?”

Ibu                  :         “putih,come here!”

Putih               :         “yes my majesty. What’s happen? What i do error work”

Ibu                  :         “no, i will invite you to have lunch and talk important think with you?”

Putih                :         “but our clothes?”

Merah              :         “leave that. How? If my mom’s food become cold. That’s delicious?”

Putih                :         J

Merah              :         “what do you feel?delicious?”

Putih                :         “that’s nice. What type of this fish?”

Merah             :         “the gold fish. Where do you always wash our clothes”

Putih               :         “your are devil!”

Merah             :         “what ? we are devil . not honey. You’re have ate it. We not. How can you ate your friends?”

Putih               :         (menangis dan pergi ke halaman)

Merah             :         “hey, where do you go? We haven’t lunch

                                   ending. Look mom , your daughter not polite you again!”

Merah’s mom   :         “what. I’m not have another daughter except you, merah!”

Merah             :         “mom , how she report to daddy about us? We will dead”

Merah’s mom   :         “you’re right. Let’s catch her”.

Merah             :         “but daddy have go home. Are you listen the voice of walked of horse. This’s danger”.

Merah’s mom   :         “quickly catch her.dn’t release her.i’ll assumed be sickor i’ll wash the dirty plate. Oh no...”

SCENE 12   (IN YARD)

Putih               :         (menangis)

Putih               :         “I’m sorry my friend, because of me you’re

                                 dead”

Putih’s father  :         “why are you cry  , what aren’t something wrong with you and your mom?

Merah              :         “daddy, this is just a simple trouble. We are so compatible   when your gone,why you’re come back home today?Aren’t next week?”

Putih’s father  :         “i don’t know suddenly . I miss you all of you. But putih why you’re crying”

Merah             :         ( memberi isyarat kepada putih untuk tutup mulut)

Putih’s father :          “putih? Answer my question”.

Putih               :          “my best friend dead”

Putih’s father :          “who is your best friend?”

Merah             :          “dad, durring you went in city, we always  washed our clothes in river. But sometimes i talk withher. She is  talk into  the river. And she thought if the golden fish isher bestfriend”.

Ayah               :          “oh my god, in home have your mom and sister. Don’t do crazy think”.

Putih               :          “no, daddy they are difference with the golden fish. Merah, i’m believe i’ll be better because i’m sincere”. (lari)

Ayah               :          “putih, don’t go!”

Merah             :          “she is like that, you know that, daddy”.

Ayah               :          “hmm. She is a hard guess girl! Where your mom, merah?”

Merah             :          “maybe she is in kitchen. Wash the plate.

Ayah               :          “okay, come in”.

Merah             :          “do you bring”

Ayah               :          “of course, you look beautiful today, merah.

Merah             :          “like mom and putih”.

Ayah               :          “you’re a nice girl. I’m not choosed a wrong choice to putih”

SCENE 13     (in house)

Meanwhile, made of putih land for growing fish bones grow into a nutritious and medicinal olants to cure disease is very rare that people affected by skin disease.

Ibu merah       :          “you’re home? Definetrly tired, let me massage”

Ayah               :          “no, thanks my wife, i’m very happy can together again with you. But what’s wrong with putih? He buried the bones of fish and cry?”

Ibu merah       :          “maybeee”

Merah             :          “well i say, putih just lonely dad”

(tok tok tok)

Pangeran         :          “excusme, I’m manggala prince from hilir kingdom. My folk are being exposed to a very strange disease, according to tabib i need to find medicinal plants in the village. And according my soldiers, the plant in the physican’s home yard”

Pengawal         :          “right,we hope you can give this plant for us”

Ayah               :          “but in our yard we not have that plant. So sorry”

Pengawal         :          “but prince’s said is”

Ayah               :          “it’s oke, what do you want plant?”

Pengawal         :          “let me”

(walk to the yard)

Pangeran         :          “sorry, are you have daughter or son?”

Ayah               :          “yes, i have two daughters” (plant extract) “aaaah, that is hard to extract”

Pangeran         :          “can you help for extract this plant?”

Pengawal         :          “i’m sorry, do you remeber tabib said only saint that can extract this plant”

Pangeran         :          “i try” (menarik tanaman dan terjatuh) “aah, it’s so hard”

Pengawal         :          “are you oke? Your clothe so dirty”.

Pangeran         :          “no problem. Who have this plant? Let owner that extract”

Merah             :          “whats wrong? Can i help all of you?

Ayah               :          “like this, their come from hilir kingdom. They want to have this palnt. But this plant so hard to extract”

Merah             :          “i want try it” (extract)

Pengawal         :          “you will not can do it”

Merah             :          “i can dooooo iiiittt” (fall)

Ibu merah       :          “merah, only your mom can do it. By the way, who can do it will get gift?”

Pangeran         :          “of course, anything”

Ibu merah       :          “i can do it” (menggulung legan baju dan mencabut) “aaah,my hand”

Merah             :          “iiih dont exert mom”

Ayah               :          “maybe not every one that can extract this plant for you. sorry”

Putih               :          “wait dad. I’m an owner this plant, will i extract this plant for you” (extract) “this for you”

Pangeran         :          “you? you a woman in?

Putih               :          “yes”

Pangeran         :          “thanks for all.what i can do fot you for gift?”

Putih               :          “anything you want”

Pangeran         :          “i want you ass my wife”

Merah             :          “noooooooo, he is my husband. Not you, putih!” (run away)

Ibu merah       :          “meraaah”

The incident the spiteful merah with putih happiness mad. merah always called names prince and taunted putih. Putih and her father ia now living in palace.

END